Wednesday, January 27, 2010

I'll miss you...

There was a story in every moment...
Every moment spent with you.
Though you didn't hear it.

There was a soreness in every smile...
A stream concealed behind my eyes.
Though you didn't see it.

There was a whimper in every breath...
Moaning to the swiftness of time.
Though you didn't heed it.

There was a solicitude in every disregard...
An affection in detestation.
Though you didn't deem it.

There was love in every mock...
An endeavor to amuse you.
Though you didn't feel it.

My being alone is my life,
but it was something more being with you!
Then my lips were stretched for a smile, to say you good-bye,
but my heart was yelling - "I'll miss you..."

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  6. Okay thanks,
    But those comments looked good,and didn't need to be deleted...
    As there are very less people who appreciate my poetry...lolz.

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  7. oye gadhe.... ye tune mujhe yaad hai canteen me baith ke padhaya tha.... and i said its very gud.... i appreciated it ..... u didnt remember

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  8. Mujhe achi tarah yad hai... Bilkul nahi bhula. Par publicity to karni hi hai na??? lols...

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